Fires Still Burning - Epilogue
I hope this doesn't disappoint. Thanks for following it and for all the encouragement you have given me. I really appreciate it. Enjoy. MaryK Turning towards Nick Heath looked at him coolly. Six...
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That was beautiful!!!! Thank you for the great birthday present!!!Lisa
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This epilogue was so well done. I love how you reconciled the brothers in a very believable way. It wasn't done over night but over several months. I imagine there will probably always be a bit of...
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Whew! Skin of our teeth time.For a while there I didn't see any way out of the dilemma you'd constructed. What a wonderful and satisfying way to make everything right. I enjoyed this story from start...
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Fantastic ending!! Not only did you bring about a totally believable reconciliation between the two brothers, you also brought Heath closer to each member of his new family. A wonderful new beginning...
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That was a very good ending. So glad our family is whole and healthy and happy. Great ending to the story. You did a great job! More please...another story? Christy
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Wonderful ending to a wonderful story! And yes, we're all waiting for your next one! RG
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Fabulous ending Mary K. Thank you for reuniting the brothers. job.
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Mary KI read every chapter of this wonderful story and I was never disappointed. Excellent storyline, top-notch characterizations, masterful dialogue. And suspense - yes, that rift between Nick and...
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I've been trying to read and catch up since you mentioned this story. I just couldn't help but read the epilogue as it was posted. The drama btwn the brothers was so heartbreaking and well developed....
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Very nicely done! The yin and yang of the valley are back together again!
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My dear friend,as you know, I don't read the stories on the board, I wait until they're finished and print them and, later on I seat with my cup of tea, my Heath's picture in front of me and enjoy the...
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I'm glad the two brothers are back together again as a team. It was hard to have them at odds with each other. This episode is not an easy one to handle, but yo did a really good job.
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This was a great story from beginning to end!I am glad that the boys are back together.It was quite a journey...but in the end...it was all good.Jan
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Wonderful, wonderful story and so very detailed!! This last post was no exception. I loved the way you had Nick and Heath unite over Victoria - isn't that the way it should be! The dialogue between...
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Great epilogue...and it could never disappoint!! I loved the way you explained Heath's recovery and how he grew closer again to all his family members...all except Nick. I felt Nick's hurt and his...
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A wonderful ending to a terrific story! Thank you!I guess it was Heath's guilt over the real reason that he spurned Hester that kept the rift in place between the brothers. In the end, it took Nick's...
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Beautifully written and fitting ending to this powerful story of love and reconciliation. Not only are you a deft scene-setter but you wrote the complicated and often conflicting emotions of the...
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Hooray! It was a long, tough journey on the family, but they came through it together in the end. I liked the way you used flashback to fill in the missing history in this chapter, letting us see a...
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